Authors Note: This is my cause and effect piece.
One of the best books I have read so far is I Am Number Four. Even know I’m still reading it I still think it is really good. The book is about a boy name John and he is part of a group and there are only 5 left in this group because the other 3 are died and John is number four. That means that the Morgidrians are after him. But you may be thinking what are the Morgidrians. The Morgidrians are these human like things who try to killed the numbers but if they hurt any of the numbers but four they get the same thing they do to the number to them. Well I just got done reading this Part in the book were John and Henry by the way Henry is John guardian and he helps him live his life. Anyway what happens is that Henry finds this article in a magazine and wants to figure out who wrote it so Henry goes to the magazine companies factor to ask who wrote it but what ends up happening is the Morgidrains show up. When they show up John has to fight them and after awhile they leave.
One of the best books I have read so far is I Am Number Four. Even know I’m still reading it I still think it is really good. The book is about a boy name John and he is part of a group and there are only 5 left in this group because the other 3 are died and John is number four. That means that the Morgidrians are after him. But you may be thinking what are the Morgidrians. The Morgidrians are these human like things who try to killed the numbers but if they hurt any of the numbers but four they get the same thing they do to the number to them. Well I just got done reading this Part in the book were John and Henry by the way Henry is John guardian and he helps him live his life. Anyway what happens is that Henry finds this article in a magazine and wants to figure out who wrote it so Henry goes to the magazine companies factor to ask who wrote it but what ends up happening is the Morgidrains show up. When they show up John has to fight them and after awhile they leave.
What is the effect of that
happening though well first of all the Morgidrians knows that John is near. Another
thing is that John doesn’t want to leave because he has many friends and a
girlfriend. Henry later in the book decided that they can stay and live there
but if there are any signs of the Morgidrians they leave.
You were able to introduce the story very clearly and it was able to give the reader a good perspective of the main event. One thing that you could work on is getting to the point a little faster and adding more detail to the effect such as telling us what would have happened if John dies. Overall it was a good piece and leaves you not far from advanced.
ReplyDeleteGreat intro gets me sucked in. This whole thing was clear. One thing you could do better in is using better word choice. I would probably give this an advanced.
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